The Touch of Love

Just a little last minute write before I left Mexico on a small underway time. I haven't seen my girlfriend in a while and I decided to write her a peom, this is what I came out with...

Your touch makes my skin cry

Begging to be touched again

Your smile, it radiates and captures me

Your eyes hold mine

Unyielding, beautiful

Your hair flows around me as your lips touch mine

I feel it brush against my face, adding to my desire

Lying beside you, our hearts beat as one

As sleep overcomes, all pretenses are gone.

Reviews

[Sarah Morgan]

Wow. My mouth just dropped and this piece is very moving and touching. If only my fiancee was a writer. He doesn't really get my writing, but I do thank you for the comment. I give you kudos though. Keep writing.

[DarkAngelWriter]

Awww this is amazing! I love it. If I got a poem like this... I'd so make it up to him lol. Awesome write =)

[Chelsea (Jade)]

Oh my god. That is beautiful! I love the way it's worded to flow all together. God your a great writer!