Under Moonlit Skies

I woke up and the first line was in my head. I had to write it down and then this happened.

We'll go dancing in the moonlight,
Beneath the darkened skies,
The world asleep around us,
We'll open up their eyes,
To the beauty of the moonlit skies,
The beauty of the moonlit skies!

But for now they're still in slumber,
And for now we'll let them sleep,
As we go dancing in the moonlight,
Beneath those darkened skies,
The Darkness all around us,
Let's show them how bright we shine,
Beneath those moonlit skies,
We'll have the time of our lives,
But for now we'll let them sleep.

We'll let the darkness slumber,
Under moonlit skies.

Author's Note

i was half asleep when i wrote this, but i think it's good. please be gentle. XC

Reviews

[Good Intentions]

It was actually good. When I read it I felt like I was reading a book about a love story and these people were actually "dancing in the moonlight" and falling more in love with each other. The imagery was very powerful to me while reading. I really enjoyed the rhythm as well. overall I really enjoyed this poem. (:

[Fyre]

thank you. it means a lot. X$

[Chris]

it is pretty good, i like the repetitive verse.
the rhythm of the poem makes it feel like dance steps.
good piece Fyre