My Music

Just some vent writing.

Suddenly I'm gone, I'm lost in all this music.
 It holds me like the arms of a lover.
 When I can't be here, I'm forever in a dance of pain.
 Just take me away. I want to see the world, but all my eyes behold are the streams of tears they shed.
 Damned to this life, I cant choose another, for fear of losing the one that keeps me here.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Really hope this was fictional, if not, just remember no life is damned. There's always something worth even in the most unexpected aspects of anyone's life. That being said, maybe it can have more impact arranged differently? Overall it is good, I would like to read more of that "twisted-dark" writings you say, hopefully with a bit more dramma (not necessarily more extensive), or perhaps with a bit more of an impact. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.