Another POV perspective of how i see things

this took a fair bit of thought, lemme know what you guys think?

this is the world of our new generation, where most people drop out from a good education

lying around doin nothin all day, without a job now they just cant get paid.

lookin back they probably regret it now they scared,cause they are goin no where

now they cry about how life just aint fair, but most people dont f*****g care

its unfortunate how fucked up this world is, people homeless on the streets trying to feed their kids

mothers turning into prositutes,fathers become drug dealers

its a shame this world has no real healers

i see alot of people saying they have depression, but some really

do it to get some f****n attention

b*****s these days cant keep their legs closed, they just bend over for the guys and strike a pose

people these days cant fight, they always bring in someone else or reach for the knife

you cant find good friends these days they backstab and lie

leaving others left to cry n feeling like s**t and make them wanna turn back time

people commiting suicide, its a real sad thing that people thinking to themselves now its time to die

music becoming worse by the day because all the artists want is to get paid, its a shame that they

all just fall to the fame.

Kids running around smoking dope n smokes at a young age, then they realize it becomes a never ending phase

wasting all the money they earn, they start to relize but its to late cause its already a big concern

theyll continue to do it until the hard way is the only way to learn

With a fucked up health condition or mental disorder which could lead to self murder

this isnt a life you would want to live, so think about it before you fall into the pit

cause when you're in you can never get out, no matter how hard u wanna scream n shout

people just take s**t way to far they always go for the fight,

always focus to try take a life

some give up on life n just sit ina seat but they shouldnt ever meet their defeat

theres always a way to survive even if your emotions are going for a crazy ride

others do it their own way and pull out the gat and go bang bang

it aint right but thats the way some s**t goes, from innocent girls turning into hungry money hoes

now i write this lyrics on this page hoping that soon this world will change

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is very heartfelt and it really spoke to me. A lot of it echoed my own heart and feelings. The world is a mess and its only going to get worse. All we can do is try to help any who come across our path. To teach and to love, to show kindness and compassion. Great job on this.

[InsanityWriter]

Wow. Sadly it's true. :/ Great poem, I could really feel the emotion.

[Overrated-World]

Very great pov! great write. Gave me a picture in my head. it moved me :)

[Forever Ponderer]

again something of my personal view...feedback would be appreciated :)