Ruined Canvas

My first writing.

No one notices me

My screams and cries fall on deaf ears

Nobody sees the tears spilling from me

I'm being controlled by terror and sorrow

 

No notices the dark cluds hanging over me

The terror rumbles and the sorrow strikes

And the darkness envelops me

 

The pressure making my go haywire

How far until it pushes me over the edge

 

How far will it go

Will it stop

When I feel the touch of icy steel

With the world's canvas is splattered in red

And the smell of leaf lingering in the air

 

But still no one notices the life that has fallen

Author's Note

This is my first poem so please tell me what you think.