I remember those eyes from somewhere

I wonder what the person
I'm going to marry is thinking about.
And have you wondered about me.

I've never been one to have my words
so strung out in perfection
but If I knew it'd be you
My words would serenade your ears
As if I were a catchy tune.

I'm a shy lover with nothing left to offer,
but a clever mind that's bitter sweet

as wine, but just a taste would be divine.

I have a theory of you and me

That our eyes have met, but we've seem

to forgot our faces. but when they meet again

we'll know.

I wonder what the person
I'm going to marry is doing right now
And have you already acknowledged me

Author's Note

I think its self explanatory

Reviews

[EricGodsil]

:) I think I am at a moment in my life I can really dig this poem. So I may be a little partial in this critique. I did notice though that you said "but we've seem
to forgot our faces. but went they meet again" I think "to forget" or "to have forgotten" would work better. Maybe not, I just stumbled at this part. and "but went" did you mean "but when". Other than those parts I really really enjoyed this. It made me smile. Made me think if she has acknowledged me. After all it is more about the message then it is the technicalities. Good write and I really enjoyed it.

[Sleepless]

me too i have been wondering the same thing i wonder where he is and what he does nice poem i can relate tothis very much !:)