Waters

Waters

A Poem by Funk
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My interpretation of a series of comments offered to me

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In shallow waters
Upon perspicacious stone
When I’ve escaped my needs
I don’t want you anywhere
When I’ve escaped my needs
I don’t want you anywhere
“just kill yourself”
Just kill yourself I know
Hardening bargains
Replacements of truth
Honesty bludgeoned
Regrets, what’s the use?
When I’ve escaped my needs
I don’t want you anywhere
More on the topic
Guess there might be more…
More from this surrogate?
“Don’t think so,don’t need more”
When I’ve escaped my needs
I don’t want you anywhere...

© 2010 Funk


Author's Note

Funk
I am not editing this. I'm only feeling a need to explain it a little. It is accusation followed by feelings. The "just kill yourself" was the strong note, the rest just crutches for it so stand on.

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