Greatest Gift to Man

 

Love cares about no one

and it never will

Love is pain

Love is sorrow

Love is strong as yarrow

Love will kill

Love will steal

Love has ups

Love has downs

Love is always around

Love is smiles

Love has frowns

Love is fear

Love is tears

Love is clear

When everything else falls

Love still stands

Love is the greatest gift God left to man!

Author's Note

a little different for me but what did u think...1-10? 1 never again...10 love it do it again...Its really the style I want you to focus on so take that into consideration when rating...ty

Reviews

[closed]

I all i can really say is that i absolutely loved it ^_^

[justjenn_2u]

Depending on what the item the lover loves, love can destroy, I agree. Love can be the most self centered feeling, entity, being in the world. I was happy to read a twist on the definition of love.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

Love has many shapes and sizes..or what i call mask..it can be soothin and sweet..and it can also break our hearts when we do not have it..It is crazy how one word can mean so much from Pain to Pleasure..crazy.. I liked it alot though..I enjoyed it..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Cece]

yea sure love is all that
why is it when i love
it hurts so bad

shouldnt love
feel so good
but hurts so bad

[Shawna Lea]

Its amazing how complex love is. I think you really hit all the things love can do to you. (altho I'm sure there are too many to list.) I like it. its got simple, but hard hitting. :)

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The style is great, form and rhythm (you are very good at that) I don't understand your opening and closing lines, that is my only quip with this...These lines are in total conflict. If we are talking God here then "Love is patient and kind." Consider revising Ty...it is worth it. For style a 10.
Cheers,
Helen :-)))))

[Candle in the wind]

You have brought out the myriad facets of love with great simplicity.