[Shadows of Silence]

 

Took A shot of solitude

While visions of the past begins its interlude

A life without you,

Its prelude

A death trying to get you,

To conclude!

So if one night you feel haunted

Don’t worry that’s just me you are what my heart

Always wanted

 

In the shadows of silence  

I speak…

So much on my mind

My soul leaks!

Longing for your heart

I seek,

My strength gone

My body

At its lowest peak

I stand here lax

Hung-over,

Weak!

Doused with pain

I reek!

Rusted from regret

I squeak

Longing for your touch

I streak

 

Author's Note

I dont know this is a random poem i dont even know what to call it any suggestions... Tell me how you really feel about it...

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

beautiful
i see the depths of your soul
the longing to want
the feeling of abandonment
lonliness
love
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[Karen Raquepo]

I love this poem. Silence strikes when longing for someone!

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

I really like this alot
It's a great flow,great vocabulary. I totally see this in my mind
Keep up the great writing my friend
~ hug ~

[Cece]

i dont know why when i write in a random fashion it flows and seems to come out in orderly fashion
this one i can really feel in my heart

yes i dont know why but i felt it .. maybe it came from your heart
it happens when it flows and the randomness bcomes order itself

[Shadow_doll]

I think that you have a great vocabulary! Its kinda a confuseing poem but I can still see it happening in my head, though im unsure its topic.
good job

[Tania Leigh]

I like this piece about lost love...it has a dark feel to it, and I like dark :-)

I'll message you with some title ideas...