This actually has many different views...some people look at it as an intimate piece... "Its actaully the lost of a friend and looking at them in a casket" How do you see it..?
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I would say from my own perspective that this piece brought about a sense of being alone and loss of someone leaving the feeling of despair. Good imagery and short with well penned words,
Oh my goodness, soo sad. I love your word usage here, its so short and simple yet i feel like youve told me the whole story of whats happened . Great piece... and your lying :) its way better then mine.
this is a sad poem that sheds light on a lost love, Gone is a great title for this one..I think that you chose your words well because you didnt use that many to begin with and yet i still felt this one..i felt the pain of your character..I also like the rhyming..I enjoyed the read..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!