2Morro

what a bout today...

Everybody waiting on 2morro but I don't know why When 2morro still holds 2days same cry!

When 2morro comes 2day will fold and the problems we face 2morrow may be 2days remold! Waiting for 2morro is like buying fool's gold So 2day leaves me with 2morrow unsold! Looking for 2day to take hold While 2morro stories are still untold When I think about 2morro my heart gets cold Cause when 2morro comes 2day will be old

Now 2morro isn't all bad cause 2morro has what yesterday never had

And with 2morro you never know what lies Cause some people don't realize The fact that 2morro never dies!

I will take 2day cause it's truly a present Since 2morrow is never promised then 2day im content Time eventually leaves 2day to circumvent And 2morro just a breach of trust with fraudulent intent And if wrong let me take the time now to repent!

Every good thing must come to an end So I guess I should live up 2day before 2morro transcend and send yesterday's mother my condolence!

 

Author's Note

I know your wondering why I spelled 2moro like I did but its to show that tomorrow is incomplete...

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this is very creative
i enjoyed it alot
i like how you spelled tomorrow
2morro
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[Joseph - Michael]

No, I'm not wondering about your spelling; In fact, it make perfectly senses to me. Also, it's part of the artworks as well

Anyway, I really enoyed reading this writing and I have to say that I'm very impressed with it. If you never used "2morro" and "2day", just the regular spelling, I'd say it's good, but you spelled them even better

So, it's all great here and thanks for sharing it...

[PoemRodent]

Interesting write and yes I can see the imagery clearly in your thoughts. Your pattern is unique and your style I can easily embrace. Excellent work again...

Dostani

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Well that is a nice ride through the cosmos of words and numbers... I love this, it is quirky, different and refreshing. The message is very clear as well...you go you good thing!!!!
Congrats on having a brain that works!
Cheers,
Helen :-))))))))

[Shawna Lea]

cause 2morro has what yesterday never had

I like that part the best. I like it a lot! :)