we are complex creatures

rough draft to be taken down soon im sure it will be ripped to shreds enjoy

in a wish i made to a promise
my world twisted into calligraphy
where language was spoken through motion
and
i felt like a pagan seashell

passion is a station of demanding ideas
where shapes rape patterns
to conquer renaissance

my hopes split into continents
my heroes fell through balance

ad infinitum

art is a fish with six gills
three to each cheek
fins are beaks with oars
paddling fits of poetry

purity is a catechism
guided by the imagination
of divine silhouettes

Reviews

[Nan]

Right now on pbs they're comparing Andy Warhol to Picasso. Not so, but as poets go, you are certainly closer
to Picasso in the way you tease the images from our minds. It's definitely art. So why do you say those
things about my friend?

And Warhol? Nice pop art but it's not going to last past the end of the century.
And Picasso, he was mad, totally mad and that is why I read you.
I like the almost minimalist style here, and it's very visual. Different from
the longer rantifications (he, hehe) we sometimes find here.


Nan

[Livenrite]

Wow I wish I could write like that! Very deep and I enjoyed reading it. Good job! Thanks for sharing:)

[Hedra Helix]

reflecting your badassness.

"art is a fish with six gills
three to each cheek
fins are beaks with oars
paddling fits of poetry

purity is a catechism
guided by the imagination"

"yessssss"

[Hedra Helix]

d****t you stole my review!

[Mike P.]

i hate u mike. u suck. f**k you.