Never enough

May be I was never enough
For your feisty fantasy
Perhaps you made it so tough
To keep up your legacy
All the vows were partly true
Partly they had to be false
And then you left me without a clue
Now here I am looking for my pulse
Sadly I had to learn it the hard way
Subconsciously I already knew
You we're destined to go away
Hitherto I can't fathom the pain of losing you.
May be I will never be enough...
Facing my deepest fear is so tough!

Author's Note

Read twice if you like it. It's got a story to tell

Reviews

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Your words fall into dust as I read them, leaving tracings of where real things have been...there can be no mistaking these things are real...I see your words as like scattering grains from a bota and we the readers are the birds being nourished 😊

[Frozen Eyes]

The way you explained what my words made you feel is more beautiful than the words I wrote. Thank you for the appreciation. :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It was like watching a wound open up as I read along. This poem shook me up.
The emotions leap from the page.

[Frozen Eyes]

I'm glad the poem served its purpose and you could connect to it. Thank you for the appreciation. :)