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A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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Did she become me?

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Does that late night girl on the screen,
Cuddle up next to you when you are low?
Does her warmth dry up your wet pillow?
Does she wait for you when you are late?
Does she let you win all the silly bets?
Does she stroke your hair playfully?
Does she watch you fall asleep like a baby?
Does she wake you up with a kiss and coffee?
Perhaps she has fit in everywhere with you, but
Did she already become ME?

© 2017 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
Thoughts in her mind

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it just shakes oneself . . .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

6 Years Ago

I guess it does :)
This is breath taking work. Powerful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

6 Years Ago

Thank u for letting me take your breath away 😊
It is truly wonderful when instead of arguments people express their situation with art, no matter how unpleasant the situation might be. Our world would be a much better place if these expressions were answered in the same way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

7 Years Ago

Thank you for interpreting it so beautifully..

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Added on February 13, 2017
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Tags: Life, wounds, scars, survive

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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Here to express supressed feelings, dreams that never came true, failed rebellions and some sweet memories. more..

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