Someday...

Someday...

A Story by Frozen Eyes
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Rise and leave

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Someday I will be strong.. I know I will be because U will have burnt my weaknesses to ashes for the nth time then and I will be left with nothing. NO HOPE. NO Fear. NO Love. Nothing to gain nothing to lose. Someday I will get tired so exhausted from the chase. The chase to have one look at you the chase to hear your voice once. I will get tired of waiting for you to fulfill your false promises.
Someday my tears will dry and even the highest pain cannot revive the salt fountain. Someday you will be left with no more excuses to hurt me cause there wouldn't be a place on my soul unscathed. Someday I will realize that every moment with U was that part of life that was supposed to get me going when I would run out of fuel to make new memories but I failed. I could only store back the nightmares. The terrifying insecurity eating me little by little will someday be done with it's meal.
Someday I will leave, leave you alone with your dreams and I hope that day your dreams will wake U from your slumber bring U coffee cuddle up with you at night and make U feel complete. That day I will look back at you cause I will have walked ahead of you, us and everything else.. that day is what I wait for everyday now...




Someday...

© 2016 Frozen Eyes


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I hope this is not about your life; if it is, my prayer is that you will find a safe haven. I know that in India that is very difficult and I am truly sorry. If on the other hand this is fiction, you have captured the pathos of a victim of domestic violence. A voice for the voiceless. Such violence towards women needs to be eradicated from the world and writing such as yours calls out.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

8 Years Ago

Fiction can after all be inspired from real life, I truly appreciate you connected to my words so we.. read more



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I hope this is not about your life; if it is, my prayer is that you will find a safe haven. I know that in India that is very difficult and I am truly sorry. If on the other hand this is fiction, you have captured the pathos of a victim of domestic violence. A voice for the voiceless. Such violence towards women needs to be eradicated from the world and writing such as yours calls out.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

8 Years Ago

Fiction can after all be inspired from real life, I truly appreciate you connected to my words so we.. read more
Someday will come where peace will rule over suffering; just as the morning will come after the night. Great piece, Frozen Eyes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

8 Years Ago

Hoping for the same :) Thank You for reading :)
A longing within this write:0 Very well written:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

8 Years Ago

Desperate times call for desperate words be written :) Thank U for knowing the longing :)
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8 Years Ago

I agree within all spoken:) You're very welcome:)
There is really no someday......
Because right here right now.....
someone loves you....
human or not.....
everything....
is loved....
even if you lost the one with the scarlet string....
they will return...
^w^

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frozen Eyes

8 Years Ago

Wow that is a really beautiful insight, very motivating indeed. Thank You

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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