Four Walls

Could be something else!

Confined to the four walls of glazed glass,

She had been bound to think and over think

Her imaginations turned into illusions,

Between fake and reality she'd lost link!

Oh yes! She had been creative once!

Designed wonderful poems and stories;

About people and places, warfare and nature,

Countries and worlds, passages and rhymes of glories.

But the confinement altered everything;

Innovation ruined, led to wrecking of thoughts;

Like a bird in a cage she fluttered her wings,

Escape strategies turned creativity into devious plots.

Helpless and hopeless between the four walls,

She watched faith slip away gradually burning her soul

She tried to cling on to it with all her strength though,

Agony was her only ally then, everything else foul!

She plotted and planned, calculated her scheme;

To no positive outcome had she reached,

Turned every cell in her brain upside down.

But Alas, the four walls couldn't be breached!

Finally, for one last time, she tried her best,

Accumulated all her energy and strength.

The last endeavor to break through

And ultimately in the walls there was a vent!

Fresh air gushed in, she took a deep breath of revival

In a split second she recollected the time she spend,

Entrapped in the four walls, and her struggle of survival

The interlude of "writer's block" had come to an end!

Author's Note

All reviews and suggestions are welcome. Hope you'll like it :)

Reviews

[Tks]

Your choice of words are selectively good, Frozen Eyes. The build up to the end was timed perfectly, and kept my attention for the entire length.of time. Overall, a delightful read!
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[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for the wonderful review. And i'll definitely follow up ur books on the links. Sorry took a li'l time, not keeping very well so not regular on the cafe. Nonetheless hope its never too late :) Cheerios :)

[Mayank]

the ending was surprised, that she was going through just a writers block, nice write.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U my friend, yes the confinement is metaphorical, I'm glad i cud surprise U :)

[ANTO]

I did like it very much FE. I dont write enough to experience writers block so I can't expound on it but I certainly got the claustrophobic feel of this and the feeling of freedom of the eventual release - superbly painted in words and accompanied with fine graphics.
Good job my friend. :))

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U so much for summing it up so well and liking the piece. I'll try to keep doing the good stuff :) cheerios :)

[ANTO]

Yes - see that you do !
;p

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome write Frozen Eyes... I can tell you organized your thoughts very well and put together an amazing piece :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for liking it :)

[closed]

i've wanted to try this approach to my poetry
i did once or twice i think (with the images and such)

but i've always wanted to perfect it

this is good inspiration to draw from as far as the technique used
also the message of perseverance carries it


-Dream

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for the wonderful review, Im glad U liked it :)
- Frozen

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I was sitting right there in the middle of the world, but yet not a part of it.
That breath of fresh air gave me life!!! The build up to that point really gave
it great significance, but it never peaked. I cant call it the best part because
the piece kept getting better. But the impact of it...made it my favorite part.
The stanzas before made me desperate for it.

[Frozen Eyes]

Im glad i could thread you in :) thank U for liking it *smiles*

[Jamestown]

Wow! This piece is marvelous:)
I could definitely feel the emotions and frustration,
this is great top to bottom, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for liking it, I was just experimenting a lil and ur words assure Im not mixing the wrong chemicals *smiles*