I wonder..

A quatrain :)

Is it admiration or exaggeration?

Awestruck at times with idée fixe galore,

Sometimes I wonder...

Does black suit you or you suit BlacK more??

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Author's Note

Expressing a thought. All criticism & appraisals are most welcome :)

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

lovely..............
did leave me thinking like everyone else.........
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Frozen Eyes]

Im glad the piece served its purpose :) Thank U :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yup. you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Amare]

hmm, definitely short but (like previously stated) leaves readers thinking. Nice.

[Frozen Eyes]

I'd Like to know what thought it triggered into this reader. Appreciate your appreciation :)

[ANTO]

Murder - thats what I see - like Mr and Mrs Smith the movie - eyeing each other up for the kill lol.
I love that idee fixe phrase - never heard it before - strong short write FE.

[Frozen Eyes]

You just read the poet's mind. Thank U for connecting it to one of my fav movies :)

[ANTO]

..and thats without my reading glasses..lol
YVW - FE

[Roshan Nair]

A very different piece from the usual we find on WC, the imagery assigned is like just as amusing as the write :) Nice work. cheers

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for appreciating my experiment :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

[ *_*] . o O ( wow )

[ * _*] . o O ( cant believe she went "there".... )

lol.... awesome.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U :)

[Tks]

A thought-provoking quatrain indeed! I'm sure the love of my life would also ask herself this question as she gazes at me hahaha!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for connecting to the thought :)

[Jamestown]

I have to agree, I'm left with a question or two? Keeps the reader wondering, i
enjoyed the thought process, Great piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Im glad that the purpose has been served :) Thank U for liking it :)

[Jamestown]

Brat! So fill us in:) lmao...

[Frozen Eyes]

naah!! I'd like to keep the mystery intact ;) roflol

[Warren Daniel II]

This poem leaves the reader asking a lot of questions, its different and I like it, short and sweet. A very good read.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U so much Warren :)