I wonder..

I wonder..

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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A quatrain :)

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Is it admiration or exaggeration?
Awestruck at times with idée fixe galore,
Sometimes I wonder...
Does black suit you or you suit BlacK more??
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© 2015 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
Expressing a thought. All criticism & appraisals are most welcome :)

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lovely..............
did leave me thinking like everyone else.........
i loved it!!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Im glad the piece served its purpose :) Thank U :)
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

yup. you are welcome!!! :) :)
hmm, definitely short but (like previously stated) leaves readers thinking. Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

I'd Like to know what thought it triggered into this reader. Appreciate your appreciation :)
Murder - thats what I see - like Mr and Mrs Smith the movie - eyeing each other up for the kill lol.
I love that idee fixe phrase - never heard it before - strong short write FE.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

You just read the poet's mind. Thank U for connecting it to one of my fav movies :)
ANTO

9 Years Ago

..and thats without my reading glasses..lol
YVW - FE
A very different piece from the usual we find on WC, the imagery assigned is like just as amusing as the write :) Nice work. cheers

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for appreciating my experiment :)
[ *_*] . o O ( wow )

[ * _*] . o O ( cant believe she went "there".... )

lol.... awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U :)
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A thought-provoking quatrain indeed! I'm sure the love of my life would also ask herself this question as she gazes at me hahaha!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for connecting to the thought :)
I have to agree, I'm left with a question or two? Keeps the reader wondering, i
enjoyed the thought process, Great piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Im glad that the purpose has been served :) Thank U for liking it :)
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Brat! So fill us in:) lmao...
Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

naah!! I'd like to keep the mystery intact ;) roflol
This poem leaves the reader asking a lot of questions, its different and I like it, short and sweet. A very good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U so much Warren :)

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Added on February 22, 2015
Last Updated on February 22, 2015
Tags: narcissism, wonder, awe, spoken word

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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