Eight Birds Sat On Two Branches of a Tree with 1986 leaves on it!!

Eight Birds Sat On Two Branches of a Tree with 1986 leaves on it!!

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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My Birthday Gift to Myself!

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Let the years run at whatever speed they want to,

I’ve stopped ageing with time!

All the lessons I’ve learned, all the experience I have,

With time they may sublime!

When the journey is so thrilling and adventurous,

Who cares about the destination?

The frame of mind and body keeps changing,

Why waste time in estimation?

I may be just an online contact from a virtual space,

Or a very close friend, or just another known face!

But every one of you is equivalently unique to me,

All of you share equal importance!

I’m grateful to all the people who stood by me,

Shared my joys, empathized pain and never went away!

But I’m more thankful to them who rendered me WORTHLESS,

It’s because of them I am who I am today!

 

 

© 2015 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
Don't be misguided by the 'title'.. Age is just a number.. ;)

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Happy...I guess I will just cancel that and wish you to live a Happy Life!!
You made me smile as you asked "why waste time in estimation"?
I guess if I took time to figure out exactly who I am in reference to time,
by the time I finish I am no longer that same exact person because time has passed. lol.
Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for such wonderful insight & the lovely wish :)



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I loved it, the title adds the real punch here for those who can decipher it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for liking it .. though my gratitude reached u a lil late, but there's always time :)
We get so caught up in age and how much time we have left, that we miss the point of living. We should just let it go and find some form of joy in the moment of now. Change is inevitable, but if we have a positive outlook and people who accept us for what we are, we'll make it through alright. Thank you for sharing again!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Very true :) Thank U :)
Happy belated birthday wishes F.E. - oh wait Im not late - Im just sooooper early for next year ! ;p

Loved the title - really unique. I like the sentiment throughout - long may that frame of mind reign!
Hip hip - hooray
Hip hip hooray
Hip hip hooray !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank You for the lovely wish :) Thank U for appreciating the sentiment & noticing the title :)
Happy...I guess I will just cancel that and wish you to live a Happy Life!!
You made me smile as you asked "why waste time in estimation"?
I guess if I took time to figure out exactly who I am in reference to time,
by the time I finish I am no longer that same exact person because time has passed. lol.
Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for such wonderful insight & the lovely wish :)
This is fantastic, the last line is so powerful and uplifting, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for liking it :)
Very beautiful message hidden in your words :)
Nicely written dear :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

9 Years Ago

Thank U for reading & liking it :)
BlueDreams

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :)

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Added on February 9, 2015
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Tags: Birthday, Life

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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