Another You!

Do I really know you?

The lyrical fantasy

That I see...

When I become

Another ME!

The nicotine stained breath,

The sweating forehead,

The uncanny expressions

The swears you mumble,

The games you play, 

The jokes you crack, 

The masks you wear, 

Fake wrinkles of despair, 

The cruel mind,

The addictive tyranny, 

The husky voice,

The urging laughter,

The romance that lingers

Till the midnight hours,

All of these and everything else

Makes you "ANOTHER" YOU!

Reviews

[Christopher Casper]

This makes me think of someone standing in front of a mirror, acting out all of the different personalities they can think of. We all have many faces. It's up to us to decide what our true face will be. Once again I like the pacing. Thank you so much for sharing this with me! :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for appreciating :)

[promqueen]

I love this poem!!!! It appeals to the emotions. Another you..... Very original. Beautiful

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u so much for the review.. Keep reading :)

[Skai Rain]

Great poem. It confused me a little, not going to lie. I am a little unsure what you're trying to say with it but it gives off emotion and makes the reader feel something. That is the important part. Keep up the good work!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u Brit for "feeling something" and for the helpful review. Confusions? hmm that was the idea! I just wanted to say through the lines tht how we could all of a sudden behave in a completely opposite manner and become a stranger to ourselves :) Keep reading :)