Another You!

Do I really know you?

The lyrical fantasy

That I see...

When I become

Another ME!

The nicotine stained breath,

The sweating forehead,

The uncanny expressions

The swears you mumble,

The games you play, 

The jokes you crack, 

The masks you wear, 

Fake wrinkles of despair, 

The cruel mind,

The addictive tyranny, 

The husky voice,

The urging laughter,

The romance that lingers

Till the midnight hours,

All of these and everything else

Makes you "ANOTHER" YOU!

Reviews

[Christopher Casper]

This makes me think of someone standing in front of a mirror, acting out all of the different personalities they can think of. We all have many faces. It's up to us to decide what our true face will be. Once again I like the pacing. Thank you so much for sharing this with me! :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for appreciating :)

[Roshan Nair]

I liked this structure you have used, its static yet definitely uncompromising of your rhythm and intent.. loved it! cheers on the great work :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for liking it :) cheers!

[Pryde Foltz]

Great piece and you did some really wonderful things with rhythm.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U :) your views mean a lot :)

[Andy Lewis]

Reminds me of a life I once lived, years ago.
It was the darkest years of my life, and yet I find myself longingto return.
Thanks for sharing...great read!

[Frozen Eyes]

Its good to know you could relate. Thank U for reading :)

[Jamestown]

Reminds me of fight club, the ultra ego, second personality, I like the piece
very much, I can relate, I have been told people love me until I'm upset, so
kind of a second me, this is fantastic, love it! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Im glad you could relate. Thank U for appreciating :)

[AaronFreitas]

That's an awesome piece :) very enjoyable read thanks for sharing :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for appreciating :)

[Shiveon]

I wanted to write only "love it". but it wanted atlest 25 words, so nevermind again "love It"

[Frozen Eyes]

thank u for loving it merry christmas :)

[MBUYISA]

nice...
as much as not knowing someone makes life interesting ....its can be great a loose if you realise who they really are and you don like them.
many thanks for sharing

[Frozen Eyes]

We all crave to know the unknown but the facts r not always friendly :) thank u for the review :)

[Mayank]

you don't have to know the person, things that are unexpected make life interesting...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The imagery here was awesome. I like the abstract theme.
very witty. The juxtaposition of the two souls is the bread and butter.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u for reading between the lines.. :)