That awkward moment..

That awkward moment..

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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Did you do it deliberately??

"

That awkward moment

When I tried to scream 

But couldn't hear my own voice

And you seemingly read my mind

Appeared out of the blue to rescue me!

 

That awkward moment

When I lay all by myself

Dodging the unwanted pictures

Of those nightmares in my head

And you cuddled up right next to me!

 

That awkward moment

When loneliness seemed to be

The only truth of my life

And you rushed from nowhere

To hold my hands and walk with me!

 

That awkward moment

When I tried to erase

All the awkward memories

And you, showed up yet again

Perhaps to create another awkward spree!

 

© 2014 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
Spontaneous thoughts :)

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When I tried to erase
All the awkward memories
And you, showed up yet again
With Flowers in your Hand... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Awkward indeed ;)
Thank You :)
Merry Christmas :)
nice poem structure
i enjoyed reading it....just one more awkward moment........ when goodbye make sense

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank u :) Keep reading :)
there are so many such awkward moments, I rant them on twitter.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweet comforting work. It gave me a warm feeling.
I think this would be the definition of true love.
Beautiful gem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

True Love it is.. Thank U :)

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Added on October 26, 2014
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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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