Under the sheet

Under the sheet

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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What was it that they were supposed to do?

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Under the dim glow of the stars

On a moonless night

By the rocks on the bed of sand

Nigh the ashes of put out light

They lie covered in a "milky" white sheet

Their bawdiness audaciously peeping

Through its gossamer fibre

Torridity of their bodies

Trying to burn down the landscape

Lying sterile in a taut embrace

They let a few sighs escape

Mist and smoke set the ambience

Thoughts clouded, speech blurred, plans faded

Only hormones react skillfully

Minds lost, souls entangled, worries jaded

One touch.. a lots of quiver

And then the immaculate desires surface

The whimpers she makes spontaneously

Defeat the cacophony of the waves

And their breaths create a melody

One Final glance at each other's eyes

Hence the pristine worship of Love begins

The obstinate rendezvous with their perennial Demise!

 

© 2014 Frozen Eyes


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Well thought out, written and executed. I enjoyed the wording that causes wonderful
imagery. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U for liking it :)
Quite the romantic rendezvous under the stars and in nature nice poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U Stowe :)
W R Stowe

10 Years Ago

your welcome
Very unique,beautiful and erotic poem just the way you wrote is makes it sound unbelievably beautiful of what the two people were doing together.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) keep reading :)

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Added on September 30, 2014
Last Updated on October 1, 2014
Tags: romance, love, erotica, lovers, eternity

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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Here to express supressed feelings, dreams that never came true, failed rebellions and some sweet memories. more..

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