"Tomorrow" there will be just "EMPTINESS"

Die in your arms tonight

You and I

Locked each other in an empty room

The empty space

Staring at us from all directions

Whispers echo

Breath gushes out like tidal waves

Fear takes over

I know THIS will never happen again

So do you

We kill the distance between us

Air struggles to pass

You touch my skin with your cold fingers

I shiver

I clasp my palm on ur forearms

You grin

The "future tense" gets eased

Live for the moment

You plant ur lips on mine

Our tongues tangle

One root to another they explore

We tremble

The kiss breaks but the moment continues

Your tongue explores my body

Struggling through the silk

You shred it into pieces

Nudity shines in the moonlight peeping

I cover, You discover

Soon I shed off my veil of shyness

Attack your attire

Instantly get rid of them

Celebrating Love in Birthday suits

We take a moment

Hungry eyes lingering on each other

You and I embrace

Your cold body touches my warm skin

Glows spark

Your fingers map into my skin

Touching the right places

My nails dig into your flesh

Scratching the wrong zones

We play, We hunt 

Intimacy raises temperature

I moan, you groan

Screams fill the empty room

Juices building up in both cocoons

A rigorous session of pounding into each other

U lick, I bite, U scream, I scream louder

And then,

We stab each other in our hearts!!!

And in a few moments Our Lights go Out!

The release...

Empty room, empty spaces

Satisfied faces!

A realisation clouds everything else

"Tomorrow" there will be just "EMPTINESS"

Author's Note

Dying into each other's arms and making the death worth it, Its the story of 2 diseased people who had a few hours of life left and decided to take their lights out the way they wanted. Comment unbiased please ! Thank you :)

Reviews

[Christopher Casper]

The ending came with a sudden jolt! It surprised me. It was tragic, though I guess if you plan something out that way, the best way to leave would be through a bit of ecstasy. As I read through again I can tell they were frantic in their love making, as they knew they didn't have long. Thanks for sharing with me again!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank You For Liking It :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was so romantic and sensual...and then you turned on the juice.
I felt as if I was being tossed about without mercy. I really liked one small
detail..."the future tense". Now, that was excellent. I saw what you did there.
The finale was like the explosion of the final note of a symphony where a song
suddenly ends with no warning. Brilliant. Sad, but brilliant.

[Frozen Eyes]

Im glad I could capture ur attention :) Thank U for liking :)

[Jamestown]

This was bad to the bone! If your going out what better way. Fantastic writing, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank You For Appreciating and I agree what better way of going out :)

[Ashira Macy]

Wow, this was incredibly sexy and really well written. Of course the tragic twist at the end was surprising, but I think it worked really well. Best way to go is with a bang, right? =P One suggestion I have is just to mark this as mature so the younger people on here don't come across it. Really brilliant work dear!

[Frozen Eyes]

yeah i thought of marking it as mature too but thn decided not to... but thank u for the awesome review darl.. matters a lot :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

so erotic... i could sense each and every word of this piece deep down in places that are touched only by the warmth of another body... you just captured the moment... beautiful... loved it... reading again and again to get lost in that feel...

a tight hug for sharing this...

[Frozen Eyes]

Wow U brought my words to life.. thank u for the review.. *hugs* Keep reading :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Sure... Keep writing...

xo