Hot or Humid.. "The night of the Scorpion"

Just Imagine..

Oh yes that phase of enstrangement is finally over! Oh How long have WE waited for this! Now we can be together again. I have walked a thousand miles,watched a thousand rivers change course, let a thousand suns scorch me, a thousand moons guide me back to you.

And here we were on some night of monsoon when the scorpion will crawl under my skin spreading its love venom slowly drop by drop. Driving my mind crazy for your touch. Prying from the dark, breathing heavily...you watch me burn in pain wriggle on the bed...cling to the clean dry sheets and my naked body turn red then blue with pain of love...A moment of silence!

And then you rush to me with passion overflowing. Take my frenzied body in your arms, shower me with sloppy kisses all over. We get dirty with each others muddy sweat. From the bed to the bed stand we roll and drill. Then you pin me to the wall. I writhe in agony under your grip. You grin wickedly and show no mercy. With every passing moment the rain speeds up and your kisses turn into nibbles and painful bites. I moan, I groan and we scream with ardor of love. 

The scorpion has achieved its nasty ambition and it is watching us making passionate love. Smiles of accomplishment fading into the darkness of the night...

Author's Note

Not for Kids.. :P

Reviews

[Mayank]

W.I.L.D
Do I have to say anything more?

[Frozen Eyes]

That says it all..
*grins*

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whew!!!
[ *_*] . o O ( I Plead the 5th. )

[Frozen Eyes]

Smiles all the way :)

[AaronFreitas]

Haha definitely hot and steamy! Like James said... made me start wanting a little somthing right now! haha good work :)

[Frozen Eyes]

couldn't agree more. Thank U for reading :)

[Jamestown]

This was fun, sexy and well written! I must admit made me long for some,
well you know, lol! Thanks for sharing.

[Frozen Eyes]

Hahaha yes i know.. and Im glad the piece served its purpose. :)
Thank You For Liking It :)

[Christopher Casper]

This was very sexy and pleasurable with a bite. I find that comparing love to a scorpion sting to be brilliant. I wish I would have thought of that! :) It is intense and gripping. Thank you for sharing my friend!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thoughts keep pondering catch one read one write one.. Thank U for liking it :)

[Dean]

I don't normally read prose on this site,but I love erotica. This shows promise--now lead me further! (and if you like erotic poetry, see mine...there if you search for it.) :-)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank u fr the review. I'd definitely go through ur writings :)

[Dean]

Thanks. Please let me know if you cannot locate them. They are rather far back on the list. Best of them is my "Apotheosis of a Lover"

[Ashira Macy]

This was intense girlie, and epically sexy. I love the concept of having love infect you like a scorpion sting, that is a really interesting way to put it, and rather accurate too. It really is all consuming. Brilliant job dear!

[Frozen Eyes]

Loved tht u liked it :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

reminds me of an intense evening, where I got stung by a scorpion and then...

[Shiveon]

loved it at first Sting..

[Frozen Eyes]

thanks for the review :)