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The Show has just Begun...

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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You made me fall for you
And you weren't there to catch me
You said you aren't like the rest
Yes, you were truthfull
You were the worst!
When I broke into pieces 
You smiled
I mended myself and moved on
Then I broke again
You laughed
I glued myself and stood again
This time I mashed into dust
You celebrated
I let you felicitate your victory
U have seen me in my good
Observed me in my bad
U kept a close eye on my best
But haven't met me when im worst
Watch me burn.. and rise from the ashes again
Watch me morph into someone else and then
You will no longer control me I promise
The more You hurt me the more creative it makes me..
By your deliberate affronts You brought out the beast in me..

© 2014 Frozen Eyes


Author's Note

Frozen Eyes
Enjoy the show..

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Wow girlie, I loved this one. It was so sad at first, how she was torn down by someone she loved and trusted, but the ending had her breathing fire. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, and she is ready to fight back! Fantastic work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

thnk you soo much :)
got reminded of an old piece... nicely written... hope the beast is still out and wandering...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

yes this beast doesnt get tamed :)

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2 Reviews
Added on August 14, 2014
Last Updated on August 14, 2014
Tags: Loss, Pain, satire

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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Here to express supressed feelings, dreams that never came true, failed rebellions and some sweet memories. more..

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