WE could still BE...

Learning from mistakes.. am i??

I wish I had not

Broken my arm

You wouldn't have

Brought me those white lilies

I wish I had not

Recieved the late hour phone call

You wouldn't have

Wasted your midnight hours on me

I wish I had not

Cried on your shoulder

You couldn't have

Made fun of my tears behind my back

I wish I had not

Fallen in Love

You wouldn't have

Had to walk away from me silently

I wish I had not

Made those mistakes

You wouldn't be

A haunting memory

We could still be 

The strangers we used to be!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I love the ending lines and just the idea that everyone starts life off as strangers. I've never seen it like that before, but it's very compelling. I feel like love, for some not all, is a mistake in itself and we all strive to achieve something often impossible as if trying to make a fairytale come true. We become too dependent on another's attention and how we are perceived when it really shouldn't matter. It's our life and we shouldn't care what people may think. Yes, we make countless mistakes (perhaps more) when it comes to the aspect of love, but it is our job as individuals to reflect on why we did those certain things, take proper responsivity for our actions and move on. Brush it under the rug. We all deserve someone who will do anything they can in order to give us the world and make us happy.

[Frozen Eyes]

I agree with Svetlana, but harsg truth is the only person that can make us happy is ourselves, its just that how we choose to make that happen.. some become selfish giants, some are selfless saints and some become writers.. ;) thank you for the wonderful review.. Keep reading :)