If u write my name on sand...

Don't erase it if You write My name on sand

Eyes never lie, let them speak, don't make them stagnant

Its not necessary that every person You meet should be an angel

Don't start flying on soothing words or flattery that sounds dominant

Wounds of love are the true pleasures to be treasured

Don't reveal your heart to people who are reluctant

Don't place Your Heart on a glass house built on rocks

Let it be safe in some responsible hand

You know You love ME but cant let the feelings flow

You need to let your Love find its way to take a stand

Sometimes things don't act according to US

Events don't add up and You get divided

Failures get multiplied and peace of mind is subtracted

But I want You to emerge from the drowned state

Make Your appearance again on the victorious Land

Fall in love and master Me for the eternity

Don't erase it, if You write MY name on sand

Eyes never lie, for once let them speak... spin Ur magic wand.....

 

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

Don't reveal your heart to people who are reluctant
Don't place Your Heart on a glass house built on rocks

My favorite lines of this piece because they are so true. Those who cost around with their hearts too innocently unguarded will always be the first to be attacked by vultures. I really love how easily your words flow when I read them. Keep it up, I can't wait to see more!

[Frozen Eyes]

thank you :) keep reading :)

[Ashira Macy]

Oh, you can count on it! XD

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it s very moving and touching. very good energy . i like it

[Frozen Eyes]

thnk you :)