No momma I wont cry!

No momma I wont cry!

A Poem by Frozen Eyes
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As God couldnt be everywhere he made "Mother"

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My tears and I had a fight

Everywhere was darkness and fright

No one cared about my fate

Alone I stood by the gate

Wondering how into crowd I would walk

Every minute 'was gettin dark

And then I raised my head n thought

Of the people who always fought

Their fears n over it had victory

I had unfolded the mystery

When the soul bleeds tears go dry

No, momma I wont cry

As u taught me I will try

To survive in the cruel world till I die..

No, Momma I wont cry...

© 2014 Frozen Eyes


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Frozen Eyes
ignore grammar problems

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When life beats you down and it will beat you down no matter who you are, there is a time to cry and a time to plow through. If you stay defeated, life will never let you back up again. So after a time you have to stand proud and raise your head. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U for the wonderful words. :)



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This is the heart of defiance.
Long live the warrior with the FrozenEyes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U for the wonderful statement :)
When life beats you down and it will beat you down no matter who you are, there is a time to cry and a time to plow through. If you stay defeated, life will never let you back up again. So after a time you have to stand proud and raise your head. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U for the wonderful words. :)
Awesome work :) I love the line "When the soul bleeds tears go dry".... beautiful words :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is my favorite, never say die attitude, I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

Thank U for appreciating this is my favorite too :)
We all have moments in our lives when we have to tough and we have to have survivalist mentality.
Very relatable and well written piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frozen Eyes

10 Years Ago

thank u :)

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Frozen Eyes
Frozen Eyes

Cooch Behar, West Bengal, India



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