Evidence.

Evidence.

A Poem by Ellie W. Montreal
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F**k me 'til we know it's unsafe, And we'll paint, Over the evidence.

"
Silly thoughts tracing minds,
"He hates me," "She hates me,"
"I can't stand this flaw."

When will we ever look at the big picture
Rather than the details of his- or her-?
Picking flowers from a radiant garden,
Hoping the garden will become better;
Praising one flower more than the others.

You don't know how to paint,
So don't call yourself an artist.
You turn down all that light, & sit in the dark,
Reaching to grab your holy brush & get to work;
But you don't see it, you don't feel it...

Save your delayed speech for those who want to hear it:
Record it,
Play it loud, & play it proud,
& For those who refuse? Make sure they have something better to hear than your pleas & multiple acts of tease.

© 2008 Ellie W. Montreal


Author's Note

Ellie W. Montreal
Yeah, creative, yadda yadda. [ October 3rd ]

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Exactly, Amen to the last line.
Not like I uphold that view when he comes
around though, I'm just Jell-O.
I liked it :D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Ellie W. Montreal
Ellie W. Montreal

The Sunshit State!, FL



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i'm Mychelle; you can call me Ellie, if you please, & i'd prefer you do. ツ i'm a poet. a really creative one. i also do photography. which i love more than anything more..

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