The Antidote.

The Antidote.

A Poem by Ellie W. Montreal
"

Now the damage has been done; We need the medicine; Before this disease has destroyed everything we know; The only antidote consists of blood, sweat, and hope.

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Such an imperfection

Deserves to be asknowledged,

Needs to be known, has to be shown.

Are you sick & needy?

Lonely & lost?

How about dependent, all while being on you own... ?

 

Everyone see your wounds.

You're been hit, knocked down so many times,

You're just hoping for protection.

© 2008 Ellie W. Montreal


Author's Note

Ellie W. Montreal
I'm getting good, in my opinion! Don't you think so too? :}

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You have a typo on the word acknowledged.
Lovely stuff you've got there.
Once again I really loved the last line,
mostly because it's so very true :D.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Ellie W. Montreal
Ellie W. Montreal

The Sunshit State!, FL



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i'm Mychelle; you can call me Ellie, if you please, & i'd prefer you do. ツ i'm a poet. a really creative one. i also do photography. which i love more than anything more..

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