The Nicest Thing.

I wish that without me you'd be spending the rest of your nights awake. I wish that without me you couldn't eat, I wish I was the last thing on your mind before you went to sleep.

I am addicted,

To the acts of your attention.

Can't get enough,

I'm frail & you're just four words—four, words—

Away from my intervention.

Author's Note

This one flowed really nicely. :)

Reviews

[0]

Original, and well written. Unusual mix.

[Raef C. Boylan]

Good use of punctuation to create rhythm and emphasis. It does flow nicely, you're right.
Good work.

Thanks for your review the other day.

[F. Nazarov]

Aren't we all addicted to those acts of attention?
I know I am, got me hanging like a lost puppy
who just found a owner they think they like.
It did flow very nicely Ellie :D
I liked it very much.