Written;

Hm.

Hidden;
I tell nothing;
I show no clues;
"They taped over your mouth,
Scribbled out the truth with their lies,
Your little spies."

Smitten;
I swoon;
I fall head over heels;
"Do you know that your love,
Is the sweetest sin?"

Sentimental;
I think of you all the time;
I place little mental notes in my head, but you won't even notice;
"Despondent,
Distracted,
You're vicious & romantic,
These are a few of my favorite things."

Open;
I'm willing to tell you everything, if you ask;
I'm able to try new things, & experience new events with you;
"Maybe we,
Why don't we,
Sit right here for half an hour,
We'll speak of what,
A waste I am,
& how we missed a beat again."

Careless;
I don't care about what anyone says about you;
I don't care about anything anyone says or thinks about me, except for you;
"& now I walk around without a care,
She's got me hooked,
It just ain't fair,
but I...
I'm love stoned and I could swear
That she knows
Think that she knows, oh, oh."

Easygoing;
I will let you do as you please, even if it's bringing out the brightest of green-eyed monsters inside;
I don't mind going out to a party, or even sitting at home, as long as it's with you;
"Me and you,
Setting in a honeymoon,
If I woke up next to you,
If I woke up next to you."

Loyal;
I will stick with you;
Until the end of time, I will be with the same person, always;
"The best way,
To make it through,
With hearts and wrists intact,
Is to realize,
Two out of three ain't bad,
Ain't bad."

Hopeless;
Some say I'm never gonna make it, in whatever I do;
I'm stubborn, & vulnerable, & honestly pitiful when it comes to self-esteem;
"We're the new face of failure,
Prettier and younger but not any better off,
Bulletproof loneliness,
At best, at best."


To Be Continued... (:

Author's Note

i'll finish at home, bell's about to ring. d:

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

Interesting use of lyrics (I had to look them up to be sure that they were lyrics, and didn't know any of the bands). I think this layout is quite original. Shame that a large percentage of these words aren't your own, but I get that it's part of a style.

Good luck with the finish.

I thought this is a good example of free expression. The prose is great! I thought you captured personalities perfectly. Great work!

[F. Nazarov]

I think this is a product of boredom.
End of story.