Fading Through

Don't feel my touch

Don't feel my kiss

or the slightest brush

from my fingertips

Feel only me

Falling into you

Feel me

Fading through

 

Don't taste my skin

Or breathe my scent

Don't feel my pulse inside

Or it's rumbled cry

See only me

Falling into you

Feel me

Fading through

 

Don't burn me up

with eyes set ablaze

Don't burn my soul

With actions unfinished

Hear only me

Falling into you

Feel me

Fading through

Reviews

[Erin Lee]

I love the feelign this poem gives. It's romantic and blissful all at the same time.. I think the repetition works well here too. A great write.

[bethann]

this is a beautiful poem, there is an undercurrent of deep sadness in the words, as though needs are not being met even though you seem to have poured your heart into things. Well done

[Kelley Pascoe]

That must of been for your hubby? Its was a great poem! Thanks for sharing.