Blind

Can you see ahead in time?

I sense a feeling of violent behavior

When I told you that I wanted to date her

I'm not sure why you decided to hate her

But it's New Years Eve and you act like you hate her

I think you must be blind

I'm quite sure your blind

I wanted to dance

And celebrate some romance

'cause we are here for a good time

And I decided to recline in a stance

I didn't think you would mind

I was sure you would not mind

Today turned quickly to night

I was looking for my buxom delight

She was here and gone

For the rock-star"s song 

Now I know who you're going to find

And I am not the one she's looking to find either

I sense a feeling of violent behavior

When I told you that I wanted to date her

I'm not sure why you decided to hate her

But it's New Years Eve and you act like you hate her

I think you must be blind

I'm quite sure your blind

Reviews

[Papaya]

This does have a very lyrical flow to it.
Some very minor typo or grammatical errors, I can private message you if you'd like but overall it has such a great flow. I'm not always sure I interpret things correctly on here sine everything has a double meaning but to me it feel like this is advice to your own self. I'm just thinking on how relationships can start off bumpy but grow into something deep over time.

[Friday Junior]

...I know there are a few typo's. I left them there to appeal to the ''blindness'' part of the reading! You could say I did it purposely to see who would notice! I have had many relationships and I cared for them all! Thanks for your comment.

[Papaya]

oh, i see!!! cool...