Holding on

Another poem I tried to make somewhat inspirational! Thanks for the support.

As time twists and turns

My heart aches and burns

Is this really what I've earned?

 

For every word I've said

For every wound thats bled

I might be better off dead.

 

I feel there are so many cruel intentions

That we all don't deserve

and barely any happiness that can be preserved.

 

But I will find strength throughout my time

Instead of feeling like I've committed a crime

becuase I don't need this sadness.

 

If I can just hold on

It will show I've grown strong

And that maybe I was wrong.

 

There is a life that you haven't seen

hidden behind a giant screen

but soon you will know what I mean.

 

Happiness will become your fate

as long as you just open up your gate

And let your true self flourish and shine.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews would be much appreciated!

Reviews

[Heather]

goog job :)

[Alexis]

This is amazing! I'm sure Mrs. Reilly would be proud ;)

[To be scene To be heard..]

wow lovely write. the emotion in this beautiful piece is amazing

[Chesney W.]

this is very true,,, so many cruel things happening to such innocent people... but if you are yourself then no-one should be judging you..... an excellent write...i really appreciated reading this!!