Sweet Lover Mine.

Lay down beside me

breathe your sweet sighs.

Gently caress me

until my heart cries

out for your kisses

and your love divine

as in your arms

I drink your sweet wine,

which flows like a river

sending ecstatic feelings

and my body a quiver

with burning desire

to taste of your love

taking us higher

to Heaven above.

In the flames of the fire

Your love takes me beyond the stars,

way past the moon lit sky

Venus even Mars!

Rock me gently in your arms

until us two become one.

Love me slowly through the night

into the day so

together we will greet the morning sun!

Reviews

[red93]

Fabulous Marie. Oh these Irish Ladies ! It all comes back to me - gorgeous sunny days in my Irish Lover's arms, in beautiful Oxford - it really seems like only yesterday. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear red93. Grateful...

[Chris Shaw]

That’s quite a trip I went on here Marie. A ride of passion into the night sky and beyond. Raunchy as love often is when the temperatures are raised with a significant other. Wonderfully hot. Have a beautiful day dear poet.

Chris

[Marie]

Hello Chris and thank you for so kindly reading and for your sensual analysis of the poem. Thank you also for your very kind greetings, Chris and I too, wish you a very lovely evening, relaxed and pleasant to enjoy, dear poetess...

[D. Mansfield]

Love how you cut off syllables and more to create this. Nice work

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment, D...

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this was both raunchy and yet sweet. there's a brief trip into space, but we mostly stay with the action between the sheets. the reader indulges in the senses. but this isn't a mindless fling, this is as real as it gets. two people, madly in love, comforting, caressing, and embracing. the temperature is turned up, but it goes down like good wine.

[Marie]

You have a wonderful way with words, Ern! Thank you for kindly reading and for your too kind comment. Wishing you a very nice evening to enjoy...