Sweet Lover Mine.

Lay down beside me

breathe your sweet sighs.

Gently caress me

until my heart cries

out for your kisses

and your love divine

as in your arms

I drink your sweet wine,

which flows like a river

sending ecstatic feelings

and my body a quiver

with burning desire

to taste of your love

taking us higher

to Heaven above.

In the flames of the fire

Your love takes me beyond the stars,

way past the moon lit sky

Venus even Mars!

Rock me gently in your arms

until us two become one.

Love me slowly through the night

into the day so

together we will greet the morning sun!

Reviews

[red93]

Fabulous Marie. Oh these Irish Ladies ! It all comes back to me - gorgeous sunny days in my Irish Lover's arms, in beautiful Oxford - it really seems like only yesterday. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading and commenting, dear red93. Grateful...

[Amy R]

What a beautiful poem, lovers clearly inlove, I love this poem so much.
"In the flames of the fire
Your love takes me Beyond the stars,
way past the moon lit sky
Venus even Mars!" Beautiful lines.

Greatly penned.
-Amy

[Marie]

Thank you so very much for your too kind words, dear Amy. Wishing you a very nice evening, dear friend...

[Amy R]

Very welcome, dear, Marie

[Marie]

Thank you so very much, dear Amy...

[Tom]

What a delighfully penned love poem, yep, beyond the moon, planets and as high as the stars, wow, doesn't get any higher than that, a consummate, cosmic dalliance, touche Marie!!!

[Marie]

Delighted to see you again, dear Tom. Thank you for your kind visit. Miss your beautiful poetry each day! Hope you will soon be back forever!!! Thank you for kindly reading and for your too kind comment, dear Tom. I am most grateful. Hope you and yours are well and that your weather isn't as cold and miserable as ours is at the moment. But, it's Winter and seasonal, I guess. Take very good care of you, dear Tom. Keep safe and well, dear friend and THANK YOU! again...

[Tom]

Yea Marie, cold & gloomy but heck, like ya say 'tis winter... Stay safe & cozy!

[Marie]

Thank you, dear Tom. You too, dear friend...

[John the Baptist]

Marie, this looks like an A+ love poem, but you need to correct some typos. Do a spell check on the first word in line 2 and the first words in lines 6 and 7.

[Marie]

Thank you for your so kind words, dear J. B. and for so kindly telling me about the typo's which I was not aware of. I am most grateful, dear friend. Brightest blessings your way for a very wonderful and blessed day, dear J. B... Thank you again, dear friend...

[Eternity]

To me, this writing is exquisite!
The beginning, passion simmering...
Lovers unite...
Partaking each of the others' deliciousness...
"Your love takes me beyond the stars"
That's farther than other planets!
What a loving testimony!
Beautiful!

[Marie]

Glenda, thank you so very much for reading and for your so kind words. Wishing you a very nice evening, relaxed and peaceful, to enjoy!

[Nessa]

Marie, your poem is a tender serenade of love and passion, a heartfelt ode to the deep connection between two souls. The way you weave sensuality with celestial imagery—flowing rivers, the moonlit sky, and the stars beyond—creates a dreamy, enchanting atmosphere. I adore how your words gently carry us through a night filled with burning desire and tender love, culminating in the beauty of greeting the morning sun together. It’s a beautifully romantic piece, full of warmth and devotion, a true celebration of love's sweetest moments. Absolutely stunning!

[Marie]

Dear Elnnes, thank you so very much for so kindly reading this poem and for your wondrous review! My poem can't hold candlelight to your review, it is so in depth and beautifully crafted. I am indebted to you, Elnnes and with a very humble heart, I thank you! Wishing you a very lovely, relaxed and pleasant evening to enjoy...

[Dave W.]

Marie what a wonderful read, I love love poems, this poem moved me, thankyou.

[Marie]

Thank you for reading, Dave and for your kind words too...

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, gentle and beautiful movement of love words. I liked the need and the want of the poetry dear Marie. A hopeful and wonderful ending to the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your so kind words, dear J... Gratitude with beautiful blessings your way, dear friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Marie.

[Marie]

Thank you so v-e-r-y much, dear J...

[Ken Simm.]

Such a flow to this. Like ripples from a pool.

[Marie]

Thank you for reading Ken and for your very poetic comment, dear friend... Grateful!

[Soren]

We’ll wish to be held and cherished to feel the security of others arms. This poem conveys these feelings and desire for closeness, tenderness, and love very nicely written Marie.

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for delving in to find the true meaning of the poem, dear Soren. I am most grateful and appreciative, dear friend...