Sweet Lover Mine.

Lay down beside me

breath your sweet sighs.

Gently caress me

until my heart cries

out for your kisses

nd your love divine

s in your arms

I drink your sweet wine,

which flows like a river

sending ecstatic feelings

and my body a quiver

with burning desire

to taste of your love

taking us higher

to Heaven above.

In the flames of the fire

Your love takes me beyond the stars,

way past the moon lit sky

Venus even Mars!

Rock me gently in your arms

until us two become one.

Love me slowly through the night

into the day so

together we will greet the morning sun!

Reviews

[D. Mansfield]

Love how you cut off syllables and more to create this. Nice work

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this was both raunchy and yet sweet. there's a brief trip into space, but we mostly stay with the action between the sheets. the reader indulges in the senses. but this isn't a mindless fling, this is as real as it gets. two people, madly in love, comforting, caressing, and embracing. the temperature is turned up, but it goes down like good wine.