Sweet Moments.

Soft, warm, tender

honey-sweet, Guinness laden kisses

plant themselves on my lips.

Cruising the canals of my mouth

like a luxury liner ship.

Lingering a moment here,

lingering a moment there.

Desire roaming like a hungry wolf.

You everywhere!

Reviews

[Soren]

At first, I took this literally as a sensual pleasure of taste and a sweet substance that enhances it. Then it became a parent that it was also a metaphor for love. The literal meaning of kisses was well understood in my second thoughts. Very nicely, composed and penned

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i do not drink, but i did have some sweet moments today walking through the park.
enjoyed this ode to drinking. it rocks along like a shanty.
hope you had those good moments today,

Ern.

[Amy R]

Sensual and sweet, I loved the mood of this poem,.
Thanks for sharing Marie...
-Amy