My Loss.

My coffee lost the glow it gave
and is now a drink I no longer crave
as I used to up to days ago.

This knowledge came as a cruel blow.
At the cup I sit and stare
and try to pen this poem with flair.

The coffee cold and now dark brown
I pass it by and simply frown!

Reviews

[Dave W.]

You got to drink it while it's hot otherwise it losses it enchantment and becomes bitter.. Great poem Marie.

[Marie]

I agree 110%, Dave. I have to have Cappuccino very hot otherwise, I can't drink it. Thank you for your kind words of advice. I am grateful, Dave...

[red93]

How interesting dear Marie. I admit when I am writing it is Coffee or Coke and the dreaded nicotine. Let us hope yr new aversion to Caffeine does not affect yr Excellent Poetry ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading, dear red93 and sharing your favourite topics with me. I love Diet Coke, but very rarely have more than 1 or 2 in the day, and I don't smoke! It is an old aversion I wrote about, dear poet. I am back on my two Cappuccino's each day with a couple of years now and look forward to both each day. Thank you for your kind words, dear red93. Gratitude with beautiful blessings your way...

[red93]

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[Snow_]

Amazing write..... Was this poetry inspired by my poem....thank you...
Is this free verse if so....

This knowledge came as a cruel blow.
At the cup I sit and stare
I try to pen this poem with flair.

This may help its clarity

Also you may or may not had used
1 line to a two sentence...

Also i think
A Grammar mistake

as I used to few days ago

Or a comma

as I used to, up to days ago.


or

As i used it up --few days ago

Oh well signing off
Overall 86 rating it was amazing

[Marie]

Thank you for taking the time out to read, and review this poem, Snow. Thank you for sharing your opinion with me. I appreciate it...

[Marie]

Snow, sorry, this poem was not inspired by your poem. It is a poem I wrote sometime ago and am back on the coffee again, with a few years now.

[Snow_]

Ahh thats cool...i was just asking...no need to say sorry...