Volcano of Love.

Like a volcano,

thoughts of you

erupt within me

filling my heart

with

the lava of

your love.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Wow, definitely a hot thought.
Thoughts of him can definitely warm my soul.
Thanks for sharing Marie, hugs...

-Amy

[Marie]

Thank you for your very kind words, dear Amy. Hugs...

[Amy R]

You're welcome. :)

[Marie]

Thank you, Amy 🌹🤗🌹

[Vol]

Marie,
At my advanced age, having been through the things I have, I must agree, there are few other times that give life more fire than when our lava erupts...
Vol

[Marie]

Laughing but agreeing with you 110%, Vol. Thank you for so kindly reading and commenting. I am grateful...

[Dave W.]

Good stuff Marie, passionate and heart felt.

[Marie]

Thank you so very much for kindly reading and for your kind words too, Dave...

[Dave W.]

Of course your stuff is always so good

[Marie]

You are toooooooooo kind, Dave! Thank you 🙏

[Tumi]

Like a volcano,
thoughts of you
erupt within me wow that's intense
and heartfelt, sweetly penned

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your kind words...

[Jeyanthi]

Most of the time, Volcano always compared to rage we experience...( I do need sometimes sleeping volcano 😅)

But this is beautiful... like melting

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your kind words, dear Jeyanthi...

[John the Baptist]

Liked the alliteration of the last two lines. The poem depicts the overwhelming nature of true love.

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your kind words, dear J. B...

[Tom]

' the lava of your love ' luv it and the complete poem, so much burning desire, passion expressed in scintilating metaphor, bring it on I say!!!

[Marie]

Good afternoon Tom thank you so very much for your very generous and encouraging comment. Wishing you a very lovely afternoon to enjoy! Thank again my dear friend...