Tasty Tears.

Tasty Tears.

A Poem by Marie

Deliciously savory

 

Big and round

 

Golden crunchy

 

Crispy salty.

 

Trodden underfoot

 

by someone too young

 

to understand

 

why tiny shards

 

pierce her naked foot.

 

Tears sting her eyes

 

then trickle down into

 

her bag of chips!


© 2024 Marie


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The title of this wonderful sentimental poem alerted me of what it was about. Yet I was not prepared for the full range of images that were about to emerge. The image of a child, whether by age or emotion, hurt and tearful fills my mind. This pulls at heart strings and asks for a hug. We are all children at times and need that hug.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

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Aaawwwwww! I so grateful for your visit and both heart-melting and heart-warming review, dear Soren.. read more



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The title of this wonderful sentimental poem alerted me of what it was about. Yet I was not prepared for the full range of images that were about to emerge. The image of a child, whether by age or emotion, hurt and tearful fills my mind. This pulls at heart strings and asks for a hug. We are all children at times and need that hug.

Posted 3 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Hours Ago

Aaawwwwww! I so grateful for your visit and both heart-melting and heart-warming review, dear Soren.. read more

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Added on October 15, 2024
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Marie
Marie

Kerry, Ireland



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