I Love You!

I Love You!

A Poem by Marie
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Micropoem

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Carved in letters of

gold on my adoring heart.

For your eyes only!


© 2024 Marie


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What a wonderful senryu Marie it would be to spoil it to comment further. Just know that I could feel it and that is all it takes to make art in my mind.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for so kindly reading and via your equally kind comment, for making my evening so v-e-r-y .. read more
The best days of our life. When we are near love and holding on. Thank you dear Marie for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Yes, you are right, dear friend. The best days of our life when we have love on our side. Thank you .. read more
I believe he only will see it, and is heart and eyes will say the same
A short but great poem, finely expressed in few lines

Posted 1 Month Ago


Nice....
He can see what no one else can.
And that is the way the speaker prefers it to be.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Smiling! Thank you for reading and for your straight to the point comment, dear J... I am most grate.. read more
Beautifully done Marie - Fabulous expertise on the 5-7-5. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Month Ago


Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for kindly reading and for your very kind comment, dear red93...
Wow I love this mini poem.
Just some day I wrote a poem like this, long one though, with similar words.
It is a mystery how that can be..
Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

I am SO looking forward to reading your poem when you ink a micropoem, dear Amy. Can't wait to read .. read more
Amy R

1 Month Ago

Awwe, so nice, thank you to.. You're very welcome.🤗
Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you, dear Amy 🤗

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Added on October 14, 2024
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Marie
Marie

Kerry, Ireland



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