Missing You!

Empty space within

Nothing can fill the deep void

Only you, my love!

Reviews

[Soren]

Another amazing senryu that speaks to the loneliness of being without the one that one loves, The hollowness and void that nothing else can fill. A bottomless pit without the love that will fill it. Very wonderfully worded so as to convey every once of feeling.

[Marie]

You are so right, dear Soren. A heart without love is hollow and empty. Only love can fill it and make it whole again. Gratitude for reading and for your so very kind review and support, my dear friend. Wishing you a very lovely evening, relaxed and pleasant to enjoy. Thank you again, Soren...

[tumi]

Short words, so romantic.it means alot, thanks for sharing

[Marie]

Thank you for reading, Tumi and for your very kind comment. Looking forward to your new poems very much...

[Arundass TP]

An in-depth psychological poem. Surre only love can heal the void. Good poem

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your kind review, dear T.P...

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend

[redzone]

a lonely heart senryu. A reply:
Within space, nothing
a beating heart goes missing
without love to find.

Yet somewhere love lives
along infinities shore
it shines bright for you.

Sorry, but your senryu inspired a reply. Hope you don't mind. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Curt

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading my Senryu, dear Redzone and for sharing your BEAUTIFUL Senryu with me. I love it! I don't mind at all, in fact I welcome your very charming and magical write. Thank you ssssoooo very much for sharing with me, dear poet. Lovely work!

[Amy R]

I love this Senryu. Very powerful message in this simple 3 lines.
-Amy

[Marie]

Hello Amy and thank you so very much for your very encouraging comment and for kindly reading, dear friend...

[Amy R]

You're welcome, enjoy your week dear.

[Marie]

Thank you so very much, Amy. I wish you a very wonderful week too, dear friend...

[Amy R]

I appreciate this, thanks🤗🤗🤗

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Amy 🤗🤗🤗

[Amy R]

🌸🌸🤗🤗🤗

[Marie]

🌸🌸🤗🤗🤗

[Desert Knave]

An excellent use of senryu that says much in just 3 lines. ~Jim

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading, Jim. I appreciate you taking time out to read and comment so encouragingly. Gratitude with blessings...

[red93]

Lovely example of a Classic Trad 5/7/5 M - showing yet again that the Trad Forms still have Life in them. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for your very kind and encouraging comment and for kindly reading, red93..