Always and Forever...

We walk along the seashore
as night is drawing nigh.
The sun has set majestically
silver stars dot the night sky.

 

With fingers interlinked
we walk by the outgoing tide.

Two hearts beat in unison
as two lovers walk side by side.

 

You wrap your arms around me

I gaze adoringly in your handsome face.

The light of your love dances there
which time cannot erase.

 

As we walk along the sand
we chat as lovers do,

so lovingly, I squeeze your hand
as you whisper I Love You!

 

A love that lives forever
beyond the limits of time,
beats within our hearts dear,

forever I am yours and for always you are mine.

Reviews

[Soren]

A most romantic setting with a chosen one pledging one's love to each other. A poem of unity. Love the metaphor of the sea shore as the edge of humanity, life, one's universe vast and deep and then the statement "as night is drawing nigh" the twilight of one's life being implied. This seemes reinforced with the sun having set and emphasizing "silver" star, Again in the next stanza "outgoing tide" Here the timelessness of love is emphasized as it echos over and over in the next few phrases like echos in the vastness of time's well. Most lovely

[Marie]

I so appreciate and am most grateful to you Soren, for so kindly reading this poem and for your in depth and amazing review. Gratitude with beautiful Blessings your way, dear friend...

[Amy R]

I live for romance, especially old time love. I adore this poem, imagery, and can feel the love hanging freely in this poem. It emphasizes love's timelessness and the bond that unites the two individuals.

The language of the poem is romantic and evocative, with phrases like "silver stars," "handsome face," and "light of your love" enhancing the imagery and emotional depth.

Your poem reminds us to celebrate love in any way we can..

Thanks for sharing such magnificent poem. 🌸💜💜We should do a collab one day, if possible
-Amy

[Marie]

I am so grateful to you for reading this poem, so special to me, Amy and for your wonderful review. We will be married 51 years on Saturday and the love we shared has never diminished in any way, but grown more and more and more with the passing years.
What a great honour you give me this morning, Amy. I would love to do a collab with you one day! Been a very long time since I did one! Thank you for your so very kind invitation, Amy. Have a very beautiful day, happy, joyful and pleasant. Gratitude with beautiful blessings your way... 🌸💜💜 🌸

[Amy R]

That is so beautiful, 51 years, y'all meant to be! God bless u both,... THANK U, whenever u ready, we will do the collab,. It'd be nice, I appreciate your kindness. stay lovely. 🌸🌸🤗🙏🏻

[Poetic_Vixen]

The romance right out of dreams and sweetest of fantasies you have intricately woven so simply and beautifully, heart throbbing details are touching every line and it opens such a euphoric view in the mind that I one can't help but smile. My dear friend, you make these poems so sweet and lovely to always keep in mind and adore from time to time, just love reading you ❤️

[Marie]

Thank you so v-e-r-y much for so kindly reading and for your very beautiful review, which I am MOST grateful for, dear P. V... Your reviews are better than my poems, my lovely and most dear friend❤️Gratitude, dear P. V...

[Poetic_Vixen]

Your poems inspire such poetic comments and I am ever so glad to express them this way! You're so very welcome my friend ❤️

[Marie]

Aaawww! Thank you for your great kindness, dear P. V... Bless you always, my dear friend❤️

[tumi]

very beautiful, your words convey your information so brilliantly
You wrap your arms around me

I gaze adoringly in your handsome face.

The light of your love dances there
which time cannot erase.
those lines were great

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your very lovely comment, tumi...

[John the Baptist]

Always and forever are terms that few human relationships could justify. Still, the depth of feeling expressed here indicate this was one of the exceptions.

[Marie]

Dear J. B... We will be married 51 years next Sunday and it is not possible to adore my beloved Tom anymore than I do. Thank you for reading and for your very beautiful review. Gratitude with beautiful Blessings from both of us to you, dear friend...

[berenongur]

This was heavy on my heart that had just gone through a breakup. Oh, love is such a beautiful thing. I hope everyone will be loved like this one day. And most of all, you, Marie.

[Marie]

I am so sorry to read of you having gone through a breakup, Berenongur. Love is beautiful when you find the right person to share your love with. He will come along when the time is right, Berenongur... He will be worth waiting for...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Always and Forever...
Ever and never...
Here and there....
Chip and tale....
Always gonna be together. Forever!

What a lovely conversation of two loving hearts 💞 always and forever!!!! I really enjoyed this read Marie. Thanks for sharing 💫🙂

[Marie]

Thank you so very much for reading and for your so kind words, Sky. Love your emoticons too! Wishing you a very nice evening to enjoy, dear friend...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Marie! You too have a wonderful evening ahead 🙂

[Marie]

Thank you, Sky... You too...

[Lisasview]

Hi Marie,
I always enjoy this type of poetry which run smoothly throughout.
I especially love these words...
The light of your love dances there
which time cannot erase.
I am back to reading, reviewing and writing... been away for quite awhile...
Life took over...
Lisasview

[Marie]

Hello Lisa and welcome back. Life does take over at times and we must go with the flow, dear poetess. Delighted you are back again!
Thank you so very much for kindly reading my poem and for your very kind words.
So pleased you enjoyed reading. Thank you again, Lisa...

[Lisasview]

You are very welcome💕

[Marie]

Thank you so much, Lisa... Wishing you a very lovely evening to enjoy...

[Lisasview]

And back to you...