Two Halves of The Moon.

Yellow crumbly cheese
A golden glow shining brightly
Light and dark complement...

Reviews

[Archishman Rick]

The light and dark which complement each other are the yin and yang that reflects onto the world under it, as the moon hovers in the sky, giving a deep sense of solace and hope. And what's more, the appearance of this yellow, crumbly cheese indicates dinner time too.
Wonderful imagery, Marie. Cheers and best of wishes.

[Marie]

Ah, dear poet, you have grasped the true meaning of the poem. Love "the appearance of this yellow, crumbly cheese indicates dinner time too", so witty and humourous! Thank you for reading, for your lovely review, for your kind wishes and for the big smile your words gave me. Gratitude with every possible good wish your way, dear poet...

[Archishman Rick]

And my sinceremost gratitude to you, dear poet.

[Marie]

I am so grateful to you, dear poet and thank you again for your so lovely witty review...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes two halves of moon 🌙
One is always the dark night with no moon at all while the other light of full moon 🌕 Each of them teaches about the ups and downs, dark and light phases in life. Just like the binary 0 and 1.Short but sweet one Marie.

[Marie]

Thank you for reading and for your lovely review, Sky. Love the emoticons! Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Marie 💫✍️💫

[Marie]

Thank you so much, Sky...

[Soren]

Lovely I agree with Amy in regard to the duality since it is light and dark I think of good and bad, knowledge and ignorance. The cheese gives the idea of something cultured but you said crumbly is it falling apart? Maybe too much analysis for three lines.

[Marie]

Hello dear Soren. Thank you for reading and for your lovely review. By 'crumbly' I meant in appearance, not as in falling apart, but how the moon seems sometimes when I look at it. Perhaps, my choice of word is out of place, or incorrect, Soren? Thank you again, dear friend...

[Soren]

Not at all it is very descriptive and it just I that often look for too much

[Marie]

Thank you so very much, dear Soren. You were not looking for too much within the poem at all, but I feel I lacked the correct words to describe what I sometimes see when I look at the moon. I am grateful for your kindness, dear friend...

[Amy R]

"Two Halves of the Moon" portrays duality and balance of nature.
Great imagery as portrayed "yellow crumbly cheese" and "golden glow" suggests warmth and richness, while "light and dark complement" indicates a harmonious relationship between opposing elements.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

[Marie]

Thank you for reading Amy and for your so kind analysis of the poem... Gratitude...

[Amy R]

You're welcome... blessings to you🌸🌸

[Marie]

Thank you, Amy and also to you...