The Journey Within

The Journey Within

A Poem by Marie

Three roads lead to the little church
that is built within my soul.


I am the only worshipper, 
each visit makes me whole.


I like to visit each new day
in meditation deep


and make contact with my God
before I go to sleep.


He listens patiently to my moan,
a word He does not say.


He blesses me so lovingly
as He washes my care away.


I feel so happy and renewed.
Once more, I am able to cope.


The three roads that lead to my little church
are Love and Faith and Hope.


© 2024 Marie


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This brings to mind the teachings of Paul. Faith, Hope charity these three, but the greatest is charity. One might say love is charity. The most beautiful, write It calms the heart and soothes the soul. A wonderful metaphor and the poem does just as you say, giving a feeling of tranquility. I think I have that same church in my heart as well. I love the rhyme, and the flow of the poem was wonderful. Brilliant.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Now it is my turn to blush! A very big THANK YOU! for so kindly reading and for your wonderful revie.. read more



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This brings to mind the teachings of Paul. Faith, Hope charity these three, but the greatest is charity. One might say love is charity. The most beautiful, write It calms the heart and soothes the soul. A wonderful metaphor and the poem does just as you say, giving a feeling of tranquility. I think I have that same church in my heart as well. I love the rhyme, and the flow of the poem was wonderful. Brilliant.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Now it is my turn to blush! A very big THANK YOU! for so kindly reading and for your wonderful revie.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2024
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Marie
Marie

Kerry, Ireland



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