We
journey to the sacred space within
to our inner sanctuary to meet with Him.
Where light, love and peace reigns
and scatters all of life’s woes and pains.
We feel composed, fully at ease,
happy and joyful, a powerful release.
Lost in the moment, we remain there
free from all worry and earthly care.
We feel renewed as we journey back
to the world again and the beaten track.
Life seems better, brighter too
when we see our God in all we do!
Wow! What a write! In so few words and lines, you have portrayed how you feel when you meet with your God. It's a very spiritual write. God for many could mean and seem in different ways and forms. I like this encounter and experience with seeing God. The poem is also written so well in simple words yet powerful thoughts. We all gain that calmness, peace and brightness when we feel one with almighty, thy grace be always upon us. Thanks Marie for writing and sharing!
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3 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and for your very spiritual comment which I so enjoyed reading, dear Abhi. I f.. read moreThank you for reading and for your very spiritual comment which I so enjoyed reading, dear Abhi. I find meditation is the key to spiritual life. Religion is not for me, it is man-made for control of the masses (the m is silent, Abhi) through fear, but spirituality comes from the spirit within the body. Please forgive me for wandering off there, Abhi and a very sincere and grateful thank you again...
Marie,
I certainly relate... I was born at a Bible college, my father and both grandfathers were pastors, it is hard to imagine a more in-depth Christian upbringing. One of my earliest memories was standing on the end of my bed as mom put gold stars on a homemade chart for scriptures I had memorized... For my entire life I have never been outside his presence...
Vol
This is a masterpiece. Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed. An honest love. A proverb says that out of an abundance of the heart, the mouth speaks. Then we know where the heart is by the words. This comes from a place of beauty and love. Well done!
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I feel as though I have won the Lottery, Fabian! I have no words to thank you for your most kind rev.. read moreI feel as though I have won the Lottery, Fabian! I have no words to thank you for your most kind review! Thank you so very much for reading and for your toooooo kind words. I am most grateful, dear friend...
It's hard for me to imagine those who aren't able to have inward conversations with the creator. I do it all the time and it's just part of the way I think. We should be able to see God in all we do, for we did not bring ourselves into being. An inspiring poem, Marie.
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3 Months Ago
So pleased you liked this poem, Sam. It is only a very simple write with words strung together in a .. read moreSo pleased you liked this poem, Sam. It is only a very simple write with words strung together in a simple manner. I guess everybody is on different steps of the spiritual ladder and some are not on the ladder at all. Thank you so very much for reading and for your very lovely comment, Sam. Most grateful, as always, dear friend...
Wow! What a write! In so few words and lines, you have portrayed how you feel when you meet with your God. It's a very spiritual write. God for many could mean and seem in different ways and forms. I like this encounter and experience with seeing God. The poem is also written so well in simple words yet powerful thoughts. We all gain that calmness, peace and brightness when we feel one with almighty, thy grace be always upon us. Thanks Marie for writing and sharing!
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and for your very spiritual comment which I so enjoyed reading, dear Abhi. I f.. read moreThank you for reading and for your very spiritual comment which I so enjoyed reading, dear Abhi. I find meditation is the key to spiritual life. Religion is not for me, it is man-made for control of the masses (the m is silent, Abhi) through fear, but spirituality comes from the spirit within the body. Please forgive me for wandering off there, Abhi and a very sincere and grateful thank you again...