Exercise

Exercise

A Poem by Marie


A daily routine

 

Exercise bike standing still. It

 

stares accusingly!

 


© 2024 Marie


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Ouch! This haiku stands like the bike accusingly. Creative and a wonderful pointing of fingers at a population too sedentary. Loved it

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind comment, dear poet...
Excellent imagination. I understood the message behind poem

Posted 1 Month Ago


Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so very much for kindly reading and for your equally kind comment, dear T. P...
I can just imagine if exercise machines existed in Poe's time, he would have recognized their demonic spirit and labeled them torture devices. You make me smile, Marie.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

You make me smile too when I read your always amazing and very poetic comments, Sam. I agree 💯% w.. read more

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Added on August 1, 2024
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Marie
Marie

Kerry, Ireland



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