River of Life.

Sourced at birth

 

It glides swiftly through time

 

Rising - falling

 

Swelling -  ebbing

 

Gushing -  flowing

 

Skimming - drifting

 

Swirling - winding

 

through the years.

 

The ages of man

 

Never stopping - constant

 

Until it reaches

 

‘The Sea of Eternity’

Reviews

[Pete]

there is a river that runs right by where i live. i am fascinated by it. your title and ending are absolutely correct. i adore nature and what it speaks to us. i enjoyed reading about my favorite things, nature, life and faith. well done.

[Marie]

Thank you so very much for reading and for commenting, Pete. I am so pleased you enjoyed reading the poem. Thank you again, dear poet...

[red93]

Nicely done dear Marie, and I like the way you have followed the metaphor thru to its natural conclusion. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Marie]

Thank you for kindly reading and for your very encouraging comment, dear red93...

[emmajoygreen]

Both beautifully and academically written, Marie. May I be crass and say it flows superbly well but, mean it absolutely: is laid in a way one can read it, feel movement and completion.

[Marie]

Hello Emma and Thank you! for reading and for your too kind comment, bless you. I am grateful. So pleased you like the poem. Wishing you a very lovely day, Emma - enjoy!